Considering a map $w$ from $ \mathbb{R}^3$ to $ \mathbb{R}^6$ defined as follows:
$$ w(x,y,z)= (x,y,z, \sqrt{2}xy,\sqrt{2}yz,\sqrt{2}zx )$$
in order to show that it defines an immersion of $S^2$ into $ \mathbb{R}^6$ I first proved that it defines an immersion from $ \mathbb{R}^3/{0}$ to $ \mathbb{R}^6$ by, first, computing the Jacobian matrix an proving that is has rank $3$ for all the points in $ \mathbb{R}^3/{0}$.
$$ J = \left(\begin{array}{cccc} 2x & 0& 0\\ 0 & 2y & 0\\ 0 & 0 & 2z \\ \sqrt{2}y & \sqrt{2}x & 0 \\ 0 & \sqrt{2}z & \sqrt{2}y \\ \sqrt{2}z & 0& \sqrt{2}x \end{array}\right) $$
It is also easy to verify that it is injective. After that, I ddefined a map that goes from $S^2$ to $ \mathbb{R}^6$, call it $ \psi$, that looks like:
$$ \psi(x,y,z) =(r^2\cos^2{\theta}\sin^2{\phi},r^2\sin^2{\theta}\sin^2{\phi},r^2\cos^2{\phi}, \sqrt{2}r^2\cos{\theta}\sin{\theta}\sin^2{\phi},\sqrt{2}r^2\sin{\theta}\cos{\phi}\sin{\phi},\sqrt{2}r^2\cos{\theta}\cos{\phi}\sin{\phi}) $$
Where I basically substituded the usual definition for spherical coordinates of $x$ . $y$ and $z$ in $w(x,y,z)$.I did the Jacobian matrix of this and since $(0,0,0)$ is not included then the rank of this Jacobian is also always $3$, therefore its an immersion. Is this attempt correct?